Works From The Wise Ol' Hillbilly
The Greatest City

Part One
Copyright 1990, Robert E. Dalton

      It may seem to some of the more fastidious critics, that a touch of pedantry has been injected into the following work. I assure you that such is not possible. Pedantry requires substance, and I am an "ignorant" hillbilly.
      Nevertheless, a story should be written in such a manner as to depict its primary subject, and the subject of "The Greatest City" was a very ostentatious person. Hence, a very ostentatious writing.
      Nehemiah Jones believed in the absolute supremacy of man and the non-existence of God. He was the epitome of the arrogance of mankind. Therefore, he was chosen as the objective of a heavenly pedagogue and given a divine and profound education. It is regretful that such an education could not have been given to the entire human race. The world would have been vastly improved.



Man has envisioned, concocted, created,  
Built and bought with blood 
A myriad of monuments, an endless, torrential flood 
Of mementos, reminders, convincers of his dominance 
O'er this wretched sphere of mud. 
Indeed, 'tis an abominable, detestable, near unbearable blow 
To his inflated, pompous ego; the unalterable fact, you know, 
That his dominance is limited 
By a pallid thing called death 
With whom he must inevitably go. 
This indomitable thing called human 
Cannot choose concerning birth. 
Not place, not time nor station 
Nor standard by which his worth within the masses 
May be decided when he is sown upon the earth. 
With all his depth and intellect, 
His greatness to display, 
He's but a child 
who's given a set of blocks, some clay... 
A construction set of sorts with which to build, 
To play. 
And yet, he deems himself the master, 
Conqueror over all, 
Reeking in self-esteem; 
Wallowing in a spectral fantasy that he is lord and ruler, 
Emperor supreme. 
Never grasping in his shell of clay 
That he is subject only... 
Far from king. 
In this sad state with obstinate gait he treads  
beneath his feet 
All that's worthy, all that counts, 
all that makes life sweet, 
And stacks his blocks and molds his clay, 
And builds his own retreat. 
He creates, within his fantasies, great monuments. 
And in his dreams 
He erects the latter on marble base,  
And with genius caulks the seams. 
Then he thumbs lapels and boasts and blows 
About the greatness of his schemes. 
And so it is that man the great 
(If such he can be called) 
Sets out to build great cities, 
Polished, paved and walled; 
Laid out neat by block and street 
And buildings, huge and tall. 
Then sits he back in great armchair 
And gloats, and admires his feats, 
And lays at night concocting more between his silken sheets. 
And thus, 
In smug retirement and vain precepts, 
He sleeps.


'Tis one such man upon the which our story now expounds; A man of great achievement, an egotist, Whose audacity knew no bounds: A man convinced; A man to whom mendacious dreams of grandeur made the rounds. His aspiration to preponderate was totally unsurpassed. He fancied him the greatest, And of deed and word, The last. For this reason he was selected By the forces he denied, To be de-gassed. He was Nehemiah Jones, An atheist, A firm believer in non-belief Who constantly, emphatically asserted That man was creator-in-chief Who came and went without repent, And death was a random thief. Nehemiah possessed a propensity for surmounting The greatest heights, Which afforded him an unobstructed view Of all the numerous sites Upon which stood his colossal feats, His monuments, His delights. 'Twas a day such as this, While he was enthralled with the splendor of mankind, That Nehemiah was visited, though totally unaware, By a form from the divine; A realm to which, as we know, our subject was utterly blind. The specter incarnated then (In the accepted form of men) In Nehemiah's rear And embarked upon his heavenly task by emitting guttural sounds As if to clear his throat And note that Jones was aware of his presence 'Ere he ventured near. But so engrossed was Jones In ecstatic admiration of his glorious panorama That he did not hear the sounds, And thus was oblivious to the drama That was destined to change his views and renew his outlook On heavenly phenomena. So the angel employed bolder tactics To make his presence known And loudly crushed through the brittle brush To the side of Mister Jones Upon whom he laid a hand Of heavy flesh and bone. "Egad!" Cried Jones. And spinning 'round, found the vision’s eyes, Not knowing that he looked upon An angel in disguise. "You startled me!" He yelled aloud, "You took me by surprise!" Upon recovering From the shock That he'd received at the stranger's hand, Jones glared at him contemptuously, And failed to understand how anyone Could possess the gall to encroach Upon the confines of his land. Then he opened up a pompous mouth And cocked a vile tongue And prepared to lash the stranger with a tirade which, When done, Would certainly set him on his way In a fearful, breakneck run. But before the first of the vehement curse Could be volleyed on its way, The stranger lifted an ominous hand which, Somehow, Seemed to stay the onslaught of insults That was about to come into play.


"I am here," the stranger spoke In a sternly commanding tone, "To reveal to you a city much greater, More magnificent and more splendiferous, Mister Jones, Than mankind, throughout eternity, could ever build with stone." The statement, Thus spoken, Bewildered and belittled Nehemiah's mortal brain To such an extent he felt it nearly impossible To contain the surge of rage within his breast, And yet, he managed to refrain. For there was a greater compunction consuming the rage within; An overpowering urge, A compelling desire, A yearning to see this city not built by men, Which quelled the anger, Contained the fire, And stilled his quivering chin.


Then a finger of the upraised hand of the stranger Made a gesture Which imposed upon Nehemiah A desire to follow this intruder in alien vesture, Though his beleaguered brain Was churning with apprehension and implacable conjecture. But as Nehemiah ventured motivation He was beset by consternation. His feet, he found, had left the ground, Which caused great aggravation to his already entangled mind, So he deemed it his imagination. But the sights and sounds encountered, He found, Called for amendment to this conclusion. Though reason bore no confirmation, He was certain 'twas no delusion. So he threw his arms across his eyes And relented to total confusion. In a fleeting instant, Though it seemed to Nehemiah to have been hours, His feet touched down on earth once more In a field of swaying flowers whose colors Brightened the purplest depths Of the most profuse of oaken bowers. A moment passed 'ere Jones regained composure in his plight And recalled the promise given Of the most magnificent sight of a city Of stupendous magnitude, And recalling, he bolted upright. He looked to the north and glanced to the south, And scanned the east and west. He scoured the valleys and searched the hills And peered as a man possessed. Then he faced his companion With hands on his hips, And mouthed a violent protest. "You've not been duped," the angel spoke, Perceiving Jones' innermost thought. "The city's here... 'Tis how to look, and thus to see, You've not been taught. And for this reason, and for this cause To this place you've been brought." "Your mind's awry, Nehemiah, and your values Are ignorantly misplaced. You deny the worth of the precious, And your arrogance Is a total disgrace. You worship that which is worthless, You're a smudge on humanity's face." With these harsh words, the stranger Thrust a finger t'ward the ground And bade Nehemiah genuflect, And made him to sit down and look beyond the pointed finger To a tiny earthen mound.
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